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  • LonDON
    5 years agoReply
    It's definetly good, but a few grammar issues in places and maybe a little more detail needed about Raven herself. Good luck though!!! :D xxx
    The Other Side of the Story
    The Other Side of...
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    The normal high school student, Raven, needs to analyse the famous fairy tale of Snow White. Thinking this as easy, she soon uncovers the truth about the perfect Snow White, and realizes it is much deeper,...
    Bells Hunter
    5 years ago
    Thanks I'm currently editing small parts of the story, like the grammatical errors (if I can find them myself) adding details, and stufff like that. Thank you :)
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