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I am Kiley. I love everything from 1D to Harry Potter to The Mortal Instruments to Taylor Swift to Emma Watson to The Hunger Games. I am a book worm, a music nerd, and a film fanatic. I will either make my fame in the world through singing, acting, or writing. I love to write and I will take requests for my stories♥ If you favourite a story of mine, I promise to read a bit of yours and give you feedback. enjoy, lovlies

  • LogicallyBeautiful
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    Really mature tone and good word choice. The plot seems well developed and like you know what's going on and what's coming next. That's admirable because many writers will just make things up as they go with no real goal in mind-this results in a ton of unimportant details and a really watery plot which will lose the attention of a reader right away. Great job overall♥ **note: I would add a description, it will get you more reads because we can decide if the story is what we're looking for. many readers will turn away if they don't know what the story will be about.**
    Necklace
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    Kate is at first an ordinary 16 year old living in an ordinary town. But a strange discovery nearby to where she lives and walks to school changes her life. Helped by her new friend, Yvonne, she tries...
    WritingForTheShire234
    thanks i'm not reallt sure what to put but i'll try
    WritingForTheShire234
    sorry i meant
    i'm not REALLY sure
  • LogicallyBeautiful
    Truly lovely story. The somewhat depressing subject and tone of it causes me to have to read it in pieces instead of all together. The plot is very quickly paced but because of the feel of the story, it works. I feel like I want a bit more of what she is feeling- a bit more narrative. Complicate her more and give her more depth so we, as readers, can relate. Also, I'm now thinking that maybe the reason for the quick pacing is because: a) you want this to be a short story. b)you want the story to be an overview of Alice's life, therefore, there is alot to get in. If either of these are the case it makes sense for you to not go so in depth :)
    So far I love it. You have a real talent for writing and I loved the poem for the prologue. Beautifully sad idea♥
    Shattered reflections (book 1 in the shattered series)
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    Alice is a 14 year old mess. She gets bullied, her parents have broken up and shes anorexic. Will anything be able to turn her life around? She is a broken girl in a cruel world. What did she ever do...
  • LogicallyBeautiful
    hey sweetie♥ I make a promise to everyone who follows me or favourites one of my Movellas- I will read a bit of one of your Movellas and give you feedback. Which one would you like me to read?
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    A twisted version of the classic fairy tale Little Red Riding Hood. Roses are red, Violets are blue, I am a wolf, And I'm going to eat you.
    WritingForTheShire234
    read 'necklace' please
    WritingForTheShire234
    have read your movella and faved it its really good LogicallyBeautifull
  • LogicallyBeautiful

    mumbled "Pale Yellow (Condensed version)"

    This is not a summary of Pale Yellow because the climax and ending will be much different in Pale Yellow!Warning: It still does contains love interest spoilers and other small spoilers. If you really have your mind set on the full Pale Yellow, maybe don't read the condensed version just yet! Otherwise, give it a read! Bye lovlies♥
    LogicallyBeautiful
    Well thank you! I've been told that before though I don't really see it (: I am really great and happy today. Et toi?
    LogicallyBeautiful
    You do! Just way prettier(:
    LogicallyBeautiful
    Of course!
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