FemaleAustraliaMember since 17 May 14Age 20Last online 1 years ago

Hey to all the nice people who have bothered to read my rubbish books! If you're reading this den you make meh happy!!! I really want to be an author, just not too sure if I'm good enough. Lol! I love Harry potter and tigers. <3 if you want me to read your books I'm more than happy!

  • Coming Home
    Coming Home
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  • Breaking Through
    Breaking Through
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  • Pips
    3 years agoReply
    Thanks :) do we get a grade? In this review you gave me an example of the first part to change but you wrote it in present tense and my whole book is in past tense. :/ so I can't change it to that.
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    A lot of people are doing this but I don't care so am I! I love to read books and a lot of people on here want feed back on there books. So I made this book. I will read your story (must be at least 3...
  • Pips
    3 years agoReply
    This is an awesome book but I found it so very random when London asks this guy she hardly knows to teach her about sex. Like who does that? :/
    Sexual Education -Harry Styles-
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    “So let me get this straight. Sweet, smart little London wants me to teach her how to have sex? So that she can lose you virginity before graduation?” Harry asked me, quoting my words. “Look if you...
    aestheticmalikk
    3 years ago
    Well it's fiction. It's not supposed to be completely realistic and she was desperate and everyone knows about his reputation and experience with girls x
  • Pips

    mumbled "Thanks guys :)"

    3 years agoReply
    Thanks to my 8 beautiful fans! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my book. It means so much to me. :) I was actually surprised anyone read my book! I'll be updating really soon! :) thanks, pips.
    Jacquie_34
    3 years ago
    Your welcome :D
  • Pips
    3 years agoReply
    :)
    Book: breaking through
    10 chapters, unfinished
    Author: pips
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    A lot of people are doing this but I don't care so am I! I love to read books and a lot of people on here want feed back on there books. So I made this book. I will read your story (must be at least 3...
    Pips
    3 years ago
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    Sure thing. Thanks :)))
  • Pips
    3 years agoReply
    Btw I have edited it since you read it and fixed all my spelling/gramma mistakes. ;) hope you have time to grade me :))))
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    A lot of people are doing this but I don't care so am I! I love to read books and a lot of people on here want feed back on there books. So I made this book. I will read your story (must be at least 3...
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