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I'm currently focused on writing "immortal"

  • :) elizabeth
    amazing! I love it!
    I am surrounded by Alien Robots!
    I am surrounded...
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    For a nine year old; you wouldn't expect to find yourself surrounded by gigantic human-alien-like robot machines. These guys scared me! I backed up a few steps until my foot hit something hard and metal...
  • :) elizabeth
    I have a tip. Please use better grammar and punctuation, and maybe a cool cover picture will drag people in. Anyways, good story so far. Oh and also, slow down please. It feels like everything's going way too fast when it shouldn't be. I do like it, not trying to be rude.
    The new kid
    The new kid
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    Theirs a new kid at school and every one is just dying to get hands on him
  • :) elizabeth
    I've seen a show with this exact storyline. I think you should give credit instead of plagiarism. other than that, this contains real potential
    Alley(way)
    Alley(way)
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    "They say leave the past behind you. But how would you feel if you couldn't remember yours?"
  • :) elizabeth
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    HA YAY TAY
    5 Seconds to Love You
    5 Seconds to Love...
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    After loosing the love of her life so young, Angelisa feels like she will never love again. She has lost all hope. But that's before she meets Luke Hemmings... He opens her eyes to the reality of what...
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