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Fiction writer.
I mostly write crime/mystery themed stories with the occasional make believe aspect. I try (and hope) to make my characters interesting but believeable.
(I also love to make book covers.)

Finished Movellas include:
Claw Marks and Corridors (in it's very rough 1st draft stage)

My 'to be read' pile will always be huge and my bookshelves full. I believe you can never have too many books.

I am also currently doing a degree in Interior Design + Architecture but writing has always been one of my favourite things in the world. Since the age of about 11 I have wanted to publish a book.

My favourite books are any by Terri Terry (especially the Slated Trilogy and Mind Games) and of course Harry Potter! I may have read them over 10 times each...

I have kind of always sucked at writing bios so I hope this is satisfactory.

  • Lily Anna
    50 minutes agoReply
    Really like these poems, very well written and in an engaging style. My favourite so far was probably the first one. :)
    Also love the cover art, it's pretty!
    Doing Better Now, Thanks
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  • Lily Anna

    mumbled "More Chapters"

    5 hours agoReply
    Had a good editing day today and managed to get through the whole draft (only minor edits though, not a complete perfect draft yet).
    Lie Like a MagpieMaggie has dyed hair but faking her hair colour isn't the only thing. Her name, her identity, what her parents do for a living; they're all faked too....

    Chapters 7, 8, 9 and 10 are uploaded. Will try to keep a pattern of uploading four at a time now. :)
  • Lily Anna
    1 days agoReply
    I've only read a couple of chapters so far but from what I can tell it's a great story and I will continue reading. :)
    I really like the concept of your idea, it's really intriguing and interesting. You start the story well, with action straight away.
    The characters are intriguing and I especially like the main character, and how she seems to be this no nonsense kind of strong girl. The whole thing with the 'Cursed' people having special powers also adds another good element to the narrative/characters and the whole world you've created.
    There's some also some good and pretty believable dialogue.

    One thing of CC I would say, and this is probably only personal preference, having some of the words in a different font confuses me a little and upsets the flow of the text. I don't know whether this is an accident or to emphasise those words. If it is for emphasis maybe italics would be better.
    As well as this, there are a few typos I noticed here and there but nothing too major -everyone makes little mistakes like that. I think I remember you mentioning you type on a tablet with autopredict/correct so I can understand if it has automatically changed words and you didn't notice.

    All in all, can't wait to read more and find out what happens. :)
    Our Dark Lies
    Our Dark Lies
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    Olyxe “Ash” Heregale is not to be messed with. She lives for violence, laughs in the face of danger. She’s driven by a rage so bright and fierce, it’s not wonder she does so many stupid things. Freeing...
    Midnight_Souls
    1 days ago
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    Thanks for you feedback! I never put any words in a different font; it’s just how the italics look, I guess. And I do type on a tablet which is an absolute pain, because I go to correct something and it changes to another mistake. Part of why I hate editing so much XD

    Thanks so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it!
    Lily Anna
    1 days ago
    No problem. :) I enjoyed reading.
  • Lily Anna

    mumbled "New Chapters"

    1 days agoReply
    Chapter 5 and 6 have been uploaded. :)
    Lie Like a MagpieMaggie has dyed hair but faking her hair colour isn't the only thing. Her name, her identity, what her parents do for a living; they're all faked too....

    I can still tell there are going to be areas of improvement throughout this draft and I will be rewriting some of the chapters, but for now the editing is basically just correcting typos or weird sounding sentences.
    Even so I hope if anyone is reading that they enjoy so far. :) I'd be up for a read for a read if anyone wants as well.
    Squonk of the Nightshade
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    Off to read now :)
    Lily Anna
    1 days ago
    Thanks for the support :)
    Squonk of the Nightshade
    1 Like
    You keep writing good stuff, I'll keep reading :)
  • Lily Anna
    2 days agoReply
    Just thought I would say that I still love this, and all the new chapters you've been adding. It has a good pace and I like the development so far of both the characters and the story itself. :) I also like the sound of the tattoo quote that Mara gets.
    Mate Dates
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    After running away from her husband to be, budding novelist Mara hides away in a bar, not really caring she's still in her wedding dress. In this bar, she encounters Garrett, the man she hasn't seen in...
    Katie Pharoah
    1 days ago
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    Thank you, I'm glad you're still enjoying it :)
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