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  • Jack and the Blood Sucking Beast
    Jack and the Blood...
    by lilred
  • lilred
    5 years agoReply
    Jack and the Blood Sucking Beast
    One stormy night Jack was walking home from school with his best mates Charlie, Zac and Georgie. He was 2mins away from home now, his friends had all gone in different directions back to there houses, when Jack heard a noise.
    It was sort of a growling noise he looked behind him a saw a wild red eyed beast with blood drooling drown its mouth. Jack said “Nice Doggy, Good boy, nice doggy.” And he started to run.
    It was chasing after him now and he was right by his house he ran in locked and bolted the door and looked through the post box, luckily it had gone!
    A couple of hours later he ran to the windows and looked outside but there was still no sign of the beast. He walked into his room and saw blood dripping off his table, bed and window ledge, he must have got in Jack thought.

    Chapter 2

    Then suddenly he heard a car door slam. He looked outside and saw the beast and his mum getting out of the car from work and followed behind her was his dad. (With his flashy new sports car.) The beast approached slowly and quietly, then pounced on Jacks mum, Jack ran out the front door and pulled the beast off his mum but then it tried for dad.

    Chapter 3

    Jack pulled the beast off dad and threw it to the hard rocky floor, it squealed and ran away. Mum had blood gushing from her arm, dad had blood gushing from his leg,
    there was a huge pause. Then mum said “Thank you Jack you saved us.”
    “That’s ok.” Jack exclaimed.

    Chapter 4
    Then on the 25th of December ( Christmas Day) Jack disappeared there was blood all over his room walls and on the bed there were jacks clothes that he was wearing ripped up and half eaten with blood stains all over them!! MHAWHAWHAhwahw
    Jordan Philips
    5 years ago
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