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  • lilalila*
    3 years agoReply
    Great story, I am excited to see where you take it. You said you were fine with criticism, so I would like to say that you need to capitalize the chapter names, and in chapter three, in the second paragraph, you put 'of' when 'off' would seem to be the word you were looking for. I sound like I am nagging now, but it wouldn't hurt to look for spots where you didn't start a new paragraph when someone new started speaking (chapter one, paragraph eight). Hope I have helped.
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  • lilalila*
    3 years agoReply
    This is a great idea, and I am excited to see where you take this. I am also guessing that all the animes that the characters sound like or can change into will be included along with SnK and maybe Pokémon, looking at the cover. Good luck with your first chapter!
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    Six friends are anime Saviors that travels through different games and animes collecting crystals called "otaku shards." These shards are the key of existence to all animes. If a shard is broken or destroyed,...
    lilalila*
    3 years ago
    Oh, you do not have to include pokémon if you do not already have it planned, I was just guessing from the cover. Though, if you really want a suggestion, you should include Baka and Test if you have seen the anime, it would add a few chapters, or one chapter depending on how you do it, of comic relief, but if you do not want to add another anime into your mix, ignore me.
    lilalila*
    3 years ago
    That's awesome. I hope you like. I liked your first episode. I'm also sorry I'm not the biggest poster, so I won't always post.
  • lilalila*

    mumbled "News about HetaOni, kinda..."

    3 years agoReply
    Ok, first off, hi. I don't use this mumble system often, so sorry if i scare you all with me randomly talking. First off, sorry I'm not writting all that often on here.
    Ok, all that's out of the way. I've noticed that more people are talking about the HetaOni game around me more often, @[FangirlTraveler] is one of these people, so I would like to give out a website where fans if the game are remaking it, following the same storyline, and completing it. The game will have different story lines to make for bad, good, and great endings depending on how you play and who you let live and all. So, here it is: http://hetaoni-fan-project.tumblr.com
    Thanks for reading. Sorry if everyone already knew and I wasted your time.
  • lilalila*
    3 years agoReply
    Two questions for L from Death Note:
    1: Can you share some cake with me?
    2: What is your real name?
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    It's just like on devian art when people ask an anime character questions and I draw it out :3 I do requests and questions. Usually these go like drawing a reply to a question :3 [people did like ask...
    xero
    3 years ago
    Questions answered :3
    lilalila*
    3 years ago
    I saw, thank you!
  • lilalila*
    3 years agoReply
    I would say Baka No Test (Baka and Test, English name), Soul Eater, and Tegami Bachi (Letter Bee, English name). These are two lesser known animes and one well known anime, all are great in my opinion.
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    This, my dear friends, is were I will be reviewing anime and happily watching one at your request so I can tell you what it's like. I'm going to take most of the bad/good things and cram it all in to...
    lolly sisters
    3 years ago
    I shall give them a go, finally.
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