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  • Lemon
    5 years agoReply
    interesting contrast you created.
    Illuminate. Inspire.
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    Literally wrote this about ten minutes ago, so very spur of the moment. I really like the more raw stuff, that just arrives and is sent out into the world without much thought. It seems more real, in a...
    mcforbes
    5 years ago
    Sorry, could you expand on that, please? Just so I understand what you mean. :)
    Lemon
    5 years ago
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    Starting neutral, going sadder and gloomier and ending positive, full of hope.
  • Lemon
    5 years agoReply
    Well written. The only thing that bugs me is that you explained the meaning of the poem previously. I didn't see the description, read it about 3 times and found it beautiful without even knowing. When I saw it I was like whoa that actually makes sense now. Still, maybe it's more about the images and feelings that the poem wakes in each of us, not about a universal meaning. Let everyone make up their own stories and associations by not explaining what the poem is about. Anyways, sorry about the rant, great job:)
    Our Chocolate Relationship
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    This is just a little poem about love..... Please leave comments :)
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