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Young writer and i hope to do well in the English world. I love Joss Stirling, Elizabeth Wein and J.K Rowling is my god. I'm a The wanted fan. Please check out my writing, it would mean a lot! :) x Always think positively! I've never really done anything like this so... we'll see
Please comment and let me know what you think about me and my writing! :)
This is my twitter, feel free to comment and chat to me
https://twitter.com/LauraFarrell24
I believe everyone can write as long as they have confidence in their writing and they have an awesome plot line! :)

  • LauraFarrell24
    this is really cool, i think it's awesome but I think you need more opinions or personal thoughts rather than lots of descriptions.
    Also (small thing) you have put us powers, i don't know should it be we?
    Really cool though, can't wait for more!
    The Chosen
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    In a world made by one single God and looked after by the powers, a new generation of nine possible future powers are chosen. During their lifetimes they must learn to use their power and prepare for death...
    WritingForTheShire234
    good point about the 'us' and 'we' I will try to change it.
    the prologue isn't really meant for opinions although I did put in about 'Cold' wanting the human she chose to be from somewhere that was generally richer and to have a better chance of survival as she grew up from sicknesses etc.
    Cold herself isn't really a main character this was just to give information about the story
    will continue it as soon as possible
    thanks for liking and faving it though :D
    LauraFarrell24
    1 years ago
    awesome! :p can't wait!
  • LauraFarrell24

    mumbled "Sorry"

    I published so many chapters in a short space of time so now i'm out of chapters! I will try so hard to get more to you soon but i have no idea when the next one will be ready :'( make sure you read all the chapters for me <3 :D
  • LauraFarrell24
    this really cool! x
    Occupational Hazard
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    Lots of teenagers have part time jobs right? Well, so does Casey. Only hers is different, exciting...dangerous. Living in constant danger has built her a hard exterior and moving around with different...
    tallulahflanjee
    1 years ago
    thank youuuu xxx :)
  • LauraFarrell24
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    Really good story line! Here's those tips you wanted:
    Maybe have smaller chapters so it looks less unreadable to less frequent readers
    Depending on the type of writer you are to make it flow more:
    If you're organised make sure you have a direct plan of what you want the outcomes of the book or chapter to be
    If not, if you're a natural writer just have an idea and let the words just come
    Seriously good dude! :D
    Conqueror
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    When a scribes apprentice discovers he is a Mage in a kingdom where just being one is punishable by death then, gets conscripted in to a new army due to attack other kingdoms in an upcoming invasion,...
    Willbo Baggins
    1 years ago
    Thanks for the advice as you can see I have just used it and I hope it will help people get interested
  • LauraFarrell24
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    this is seriously, seriously good!
    Necklace
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    Kate is at first an ordinary 16 year old living in an ordinary town. But a strange discovery nearby to where she lives and walks to school changes her life. Helped by her new friend, Yvonne, she tries...
    WritingForTheShire234
    thank you so is yours
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