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  • laurabat
    6 years agoReply
    I love it, I just need to tell you that I’m actually speaking Italian, so I’m surprised that my poem is correct, and somebody likes it!!!!! Thanks
    Laura
    That other girl...
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    People tend to think that if someone's pretty, they have the most perfect lives. From personall experience this is not true, if you knew what was happening behind closed doors, would you really want to...
  • laurabat
    6 years agoReply
    Thanks for the beautiful comment on my poem!!! I thought it wasn't really good,because, you need to know, I'm only 10 years old and.... it gave me a little more trust in me!!!:) I wish I could be as good as you, cause I love your poem!!!! That the best wins!!!!!! Thanks and bye I'm so pleased to have met you!
    Laura
    The Chestnut Tree
    The Chestnut Tree
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    My entry for the Love competition. The Chestnut Tree that allows the young couples to seek respite from the scorching sunlight and judgement itself, towers above all, and silently ponders the boundless,...
    Caiitliin
    6 years ago
    your poem was really well done. the last line in particular was extremely touching and very piercing in itself. its was great. i'm finding it very hard to believe you're 10 years old! i wish you the best of luck. thank you so much! but honestly, i definitely wasn't that talented at writing at 10. you'll be far better than me! best of luck. thanks so much for the comment x
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