FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 14 Apr 13Last online 1 years ago

don't expect quality writing or entertainment; you'll get a ton of angst, general rambling, and obscure references that I'll be seriously surprised if you understand ;)
generally tend to write to vent, so don't expect ponies frolicking in flowery fields either.

  • Laufeyson
    2 years agoReply
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    duuuuuuuude. I genuinely love this. You've left it so open-ended it can be interpreted in so many wonderful ways, it's amazing; for example, to me, it sounds accusatory, but only cause that'd be the tone I'd write it in - but it could also be sad, desperate, disappointed, wistful - and that for me is the highlight of your writing. So as much as you complain about being better at stories than poetry, I'll now feel entitled - (see what I did there? :P) - to tell you to shush up and publish another one of these gems ASAP.
    great job bubs :D
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  • Laufeyson
    3 years agoReply
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    Can I hug you? You're amazing.
    troubled mind.
    troubled mind.
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    Who cares, nobody reads this, and I'll be gone before you know it.
    ketsia
    3 years ago
    Awe, sure *huggles fivever*
    Laufeyson
    3 years ago
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    Aww, yea!!^_^
    *glomps*
    Be strong gurl, you're incredible:) don't ever let anybody tell you otherwise;))
    ketsia
    3 years ago
    I'll try my best to stay strong ^_^ you're incredible too :)
  • Laufeyson
    4 years agoReply
    Finished mine!
    It's called 'Oblivious' if anyone wants to check it out.
    It's from Aidan's perspective and it might be quite triggering for some people...
    Please just give it a go ;)
  • Laufeyson
    4 years agoReply
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    This is absolutely amazing. Like all your other stories, and it's unbelievably realistic!!! Well done!!
    One thing: on the summary - "Confusement lurks in the air" - 'Confusement' is not an actual word. So maybe change it to 'Confusion'?
    Other than that, it's perfect.
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    Clara hasn't seen her sister for years, and she's not sure she wants to after all this time. Harper was so close to her, someone she knew like the back of her hand, but leaving the family for Uni changed...
    Laufeyson
    4 years ago
    The summary, darling. The blurb. The short premise you wrote about the story. It goes: "Clara doesn't know what to expect. Confusement lurks in the air..." etc.
    All you can do is change the "Confusement" into "Confusion" and it'll be perfect-o!

    ALSO. I just noticed: you put "Clara doesn't know what do expect (...)" and then a bit later "But will she ever find out why Clara came back?" In that one, did you mean HARPER? Her sister?

    Anyway, it's still amazing, I'm just being picky ^_^
  • Laufeyson
    5 years agoReply
    This is really cute and sad and generally a perfect balance of both! It's sooo nice! I wish I could write like you!
    Also, I saw what you posted on the competition comments, your little 'read for a read' thing, so could you please read mine? It's called 'Temptations'
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    A girl finds a boy sitting on the curb with an unusual amount of pink balloons. This girl wanted one but didn't know she would get something else instead.
    Shadow Huntress
    5 years ago
    Sure I love you, And the fact you said u could write like me makes me just ahhhhhh so happy!!!!!!111
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