FemaleMember since 28 Feb 12Age 19Last online 5 years ago

I am the type of person who's very into things like drawing, writing, reading, batman, videogames; sheltered and strange. I love listening to men with beards singing with a nice instrumental back-up, not five hormonal guys with auto-tune.
My writing varies as I'm trying to explore different styles and areas of literature. Some times I will write light, semi-plotness short-chaptered stories. Other times I will write sharp, purple prose morbid little tales.
I hope you enjoy reading them. I sure know I enjoyed writing them.

  • khanhvy
    5 years agoReply
    Strangely, I really liked that. Nicely written and good use of alliteration and repetition. Initially I thought it would be silly and weird due to to the topic but I found that it was written well and while silly words were used, they had quite of an effect on the reader. Great job.

    If you have time, would you look at my works? Thanks :)
    Another World
    Another World
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    A sci-fi poem about aliens. Hope you like it!
  • khanhvy
    5 years agoReply
    Good idea but you should work on the dialogue; it seemed forced and emotionless. And you should insert more description with your dialogue to make it flow easier and maybe put more depth into the girl's backstory.
    A Shattered Mirror
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    This is my entry for the Movellas "Secrets" competition! :) -Everyone has secrets. Everyone has memories. Everyone has a past. Often times, all three come back to haunt us. Seventeen-year-old Tallulah...
    SinfullyRiddling
    5 years ago
    Thanks! And thank you for your advice, I'll be sure to remember it!(':
  • khanhvy
    5 years agoReply
    I'm interested in what would happen. Maybe you could elaborate on the cutting part. A little confusing. Also you should finalise your chapters a little better because it didn't really sound like a proper ending to the first chapter.
    But you have a lot of potential with this story. If you have time on your hand, maybe check out my movellas?
    Titanium.
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    The Story I wrote to go with the song Titanium by by David Guetta. It is a longer version and may not match completely. ~enjoy ~Josie~
    Josee
    5 years ago
    thanks sorry it is really bad I was rushing and wasn't going to publish but just did :/
    khanhvy
    5 years ago
    You should always take time with writing :)
    Josee
    5 years ago
    yeh I know its a terrible habit
  • khanhvy
    5 years agoReply
    Haha, very enjoyable to read. I've always been bad at these things.
    A Collection Of Acrostic Poems
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    Hi guys, Most of these are quite bad but they are fun to write so I thought I'd share them with you:)
  • khanhvy
    5 years agoReply
    Nice idea, a few errors but that's fine.
    If you have time, can you check out some of my movellas?
    Elegant Silence
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    Verasuata is silent. Speaks to almost no one. She has the amazing gift to enter unbeliveable worlds of her own choice. She is afraid to let anyone enter her world even the fake one she pretends to have...
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