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  • Keith Hernández

    mumbled "Starting to write the sequel to my prequel of My Swordhand is Singing"

    Read my prequel if you want! If you do tell me what you think, how to improve it and what I should do next time!
  • Keith Hernández
    I love the story, it's very good.
    I think that you should look at your paragraphs and grammar though.
    Overall, it is very descriptive and most books nowadays are written in the past tense, so this is something fresh! :)
    The 73rd Hunger Games
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    This is the story of what happened before Katniss and Peeta went into the game. This is the 73rd hunger games and Clace, Jay, Wilge and Zafire are fighting to survive.
    thefanboy_fangirlworld
    Ok thanks it's unedited but I'll be sure to edit it later :)
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