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Logic and Reasoning will get you from A to B. Imagination will get you everywhere else.

  • Carton Stryver

    mumbled "New Amazing Chapter Added To Clairvoyance!"

    Here's another great chapter added to my story "Clairvoyance"! If you haven't checked it out yet, please do. It really helps inspire me. Give it a like and a favorite too. Also...if you want to give me some cc, I'll do the same for you!

    ClairvoyanceMatthew Chandler is a boy with abilities beyond the normal human race. This doesn't mean he isn't human however. After getting into trouble with the law,...
  • Carton Stryver

    mumbled "MORE Shameless self-promotion."

    Another Chapter has been added to Clairvoyance. If you haven't checked it out yet, please do! I promise you won't regret it!

    ClairvoyanceMatthew Chandler is a boy with abilities beyond the normal human race. This doesn't mean he isn't human however. After getting into trouble with the law,...
  • Carton Stryver
    This story has very promising ideas and intriguing chapters. I really enjoyed reading it. Especially the first few chapters. The main problem I had with it though was your use of verbs which often didn't agree with the rest of the sentence. I think this happens quite a few times because you seem to move back and forth between present and past in your writing. This kind of took me out of the story. Another thing I really liked was the first chapter where it had the long quote. I thought that did a good job of setting the stage and mood. Regardless of a few mistake, I think the story is pretty good! I can't wait to see what else you write.
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    I was made to bathe in my own blood, I was choking my own blood as if my lungs were bleeding from the inside then I fight for breath but I can’t get much… I can’t do it anymore… I’m done… I want to die...
  • Carton Stryver

    mumbled "Feedback Swap!"

    Hey, if you want feedback on a story or simply someone to read it and like or favorite, let me know! I'd love if if you guys would read my story "Clairvoyance" and tell me what you think. In return, I'll do the same for whatever story you want. Just let me know!

    ClairvoyanceMatthew Chandler is a boy with abilities beyond the normal human race. This doesn't mean he isn't human however. After getting into trouble with the law,...
    Carton Stryver
    2 months ago
    Of course!
    Renella
    2 months ago
    Your book was great I really enjoyed reading it! Check out my book "7 reasons to date..." and let me know what you think!
    7 reasons to date MEthis book tells you why you should date ME definition of me: well...me, Renella. The center of the universe.
    Sarah Bq
    2 months ago
    I've reviewed your story! It was great. I liked and favorite it :D Looking forward in reading your thoughts on my story XD
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