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  • Me and Myself
    Me and Myself
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    by Kayla
  • Beautiful as the Wind
    Beautiful as the...
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  • Gulls
    Gulls
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    by Kayla
  • Kayla
    5 years agoReply
    It's absolutely lovely (in the horror-filled ghostish sort of way)
    I love it, and I'm not normally one for horror. Thank you for the wonderful read, and good luck in the competition!
    The Lighthouse
    The Lighthouse
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    Four best friends go on a terrifying journey to a deserted island called ‘Hells Teeth Island’. They are there to try and prove that the horror stories that have been told about the Lighthouse on the Island...
    Beth96
    5 years ago
    Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!
  • Kayla
    5 years agoReply
    The plot's coming along great so far, very suspenseful.
    Sorry but 'considering her smile was a beak'? I don't quite understand.
    I can't wait to read more!
    Thanks for commenting on my story 'Gulls'! And good luck to you!
    Island of Dark Waters
    Island of Dark Wat...
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    Hallie is brought to a mysterious island to aid in the dangerous experiments of Professor Grant. Upon arrival, she meets Garion, a 14-year-old boy who has been there for three months and is kept in poor...
  • Kayla
    5 years agoReply
    I'm sure you've heard all this before... But I love how you use dialogue. The story's wonderfully descriptive. The only small fault I could find is 'lightening' in your first paragraph.
    Thanks for your comment on my story! I appreciate it!
    Keep writing!
    Prison for the Sea
    Prison for the Sea
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    Condemned to imprisonment on an island, the sea personified grieves the loss of her love, the loss of her connection to the seas. Power is gone from her, and she is left as a mortal.
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