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  • KayjayUK
    1 months agoReply
    Seems I made some grammatical errors in my post too, sorry, I didn't read it through.
    A Dance Through Thyme [Harry Potter]
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    There are no strangers here; only friends you haven't met. An unknown man sends Hermione back to the Marauder's Era as revenge, however, the consequences are far more disastrous than what even he imagines...
  • KayjayUK
    1 months agoReply
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    This is a superb story, you have captured the essence that Jo Rowling put into her characters and you have filled out the story with excellent prose, as good as reading a JKR original. Well done indeed ! Could I suggest that you read through your chaoters before posting. I only say this because there are some grammatical errs that yiu would pick up on immediately.These in no way detract from your excellent writing. You have all the makings of a professional author. Keep it up !!
    A Dance Through Thyme [Harry Potter]
    A Dance Through...
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    51.2k
    243
    There are no strangers here; only friends you haven't met. An unknown man sends Hermione back to the Marauder's Era as revenge, however, the consequences are far more disastrous than what even he imagines...
    Fluteplayer56
    1 months ago
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    Thank you for the feedback :) Grammar is not one of my strong points. I have since learned to get someone else to do the proof reading. It's always more productive to get another set of eyes to look over what I've written and pick up any mistakes.
    KayjayUK
    1 months ago
    Yes, a second reader for proof readings a great idea.

    Please, I was not complaining about your grammar in general, I was just making a suggestion. Your stories are superb, you have thought out your plots well and as I said previously you seem to have captured Jo's style well, particularly Dumbledore, 'I implore you' :-)
    All I have for you is praise, you're a superb author and I see no reason why you shouldn't be able to go pro and earn a living from writing, I only wish I was as fluent with ideas, that is my downfall in writing.

    Well done indeed and I'll be reading all your future offerings!

    Keith
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