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  • Kate07
    6 years agoReply
    It's good Whitman. :) And you said to be before you don't normally do poetry and yet, it's very good. :) Are you planning on writing some more? :)
    Super Sonnet Love
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    Love is like a butterfly. It flaps about and then it dies.
    Kate07
    6 years ago
    *me not 'be' -_-'
    Whitman
    6 years ago
    I have tried, but poetry is a real struggle for me. I'll probably add to this between other projects. Glad you liked it!
  • Kate07
    6 years agoReply
    Its very good! :) I like it! But there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. For example: rougth should be spelt rough, justv should be just. Also this part doesn't make sense: 'Love is makes you feel'. It should be like: 'Love makes you feel' or 'Love is like'. I like the rhyme scheme and the repetition of the word love. :D
    The Way Love is meant to be!
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    this is about the way love is meant to be!
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