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  • JustJeffery
    3 years agoReply
    Now THAT is something.
    Awesome, Kate. You truly are a unique individual :)
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    Just weird and random facts about me..
    WorldsImagine
    3 years ago
    Why thank you Jeffery. I was really self conscience about putting this up, thinking that people would think I'm weird.. But then I realised, I don't really care what people think. :)
  • JustJeffery
    3 years agoReply
    Now, if you wanted to be insanely boring, you could make the girl a vampire. Unfortunately, that's pretty much done to death so, to make it different, explore different avenues. How many supernatural creatures are there that don't typically get a lot of rep in the writing world? I invite you to look at creatures like redcaps, kappas, strange, kinda outlandish mythical creatures that you could adapt into a human form. Maybe something to think about.
    JustJeffery
    3 years ago
    Most welcome.
    I'm looking forward to what you come up with.
  • JustJeffery
    3 years agoReply
    Brilliant work, WorldsImagine. It's touching, it really is... I can see your life in this, your past, your present. This is what writing is all about... transporting the reader to another world. And you have truly succeeded with me. Don't stop writing, and never give up hope. There are always those who will stand behind you.
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    WorldsImagine
    3 years ago
    Thank you, your comment means the absolute world to me and has legitimately made day! Thank you so much :)
    JustJeffery
    3 years ago
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    Glad to be of service :)
  • JustJeffery
    3 years agoReply
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    I quite like this. Your writing style is thoughtful, with minute attention to detail. That sets you apart from a lot of others that I've been reading through. Celeste as a character is really well-developed in this first chapter. As a story, it's neat, tidy, and encouraging - I want to read more. Very well done.
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    Céleste Martelli has had a rough childhood. With bullying being a daily problem at school, as well as depression, she keeps to herself, talks to no one and keeps her depression a secret. Although her family...
    JustJeffery
    3 years ago
    Welcome. Excellent writers need positive encouragement - else they tend to lose confidence and we lose the excellent writers!
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