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  • JustAnotherSmallTownBoy
    Absolutely wonderful! Couldn't stop reading!
    My Name Is –
    My Name Is –
    This was originally for the Valentine's Day competition. The information said to write about love, so I did. My character is 'Love', who stopped believing in itself long ago. Edit: Oh my goodyness!...
    R K Guron
    6 years ago
    Thank you so much! :)
  • JustAnotherSmallTownBoy
    Very nice! It's very funny and slightly ironic :)
    Think, Work, Live
    Think, Work, Live
    The alternate title to this is The Worst Advice You Will Ever Get. Remember guys: actually working for something never gets you anywhere.... ;) EDIT: just so everyone knows, this is a flash fiction :-)
    R K Guron
    6 years ago
    Thank you ;) The weird thing is, in real life I can't tell a joke to save my life :D
  • JustAnotherSmallTownBoy
    Are should be is the band madness is the best band
    He would not let his future suffer
    Putting what he's gone through is like saying what he was gone through

    This stories got good potential :). I believe you speak English and I speak American English so that could be the reason some words don't seen to flow correctly to me.

    Check out my stuff if you have some time :)
    Sometimes stories don't have happy endings...
    Sometimes stories...
    A normal group of friends are secretly part of an organisation that investigates alien activity without public interruption. But after being told they're too young, they decide it's for the best not to...
  • JustAnotherSmallTownBoy
    Very happy ending but there's a bit of an language barrier. I believe you have a very good story here but you may need help from an english/danish speaking translator best of luck.
    Think before you do it
    Think before you...
    det handler om en dreng der har magiske kræfter.....
  • JustAnotherSmallTownBoy
    1)The L in Lanto if it's a name should be capitalized. :]
    2) Rather quick jump into the story which is okay, But id really like to see what this room looks like or just some more details to better paint the picture.
    3) Whatever Lola did i think it'd be kinda interesting to leave out the "Lola looked around Torchwood nervously and gulped hoping they would find out her secret." And kinda bring in subtle hints through out the book and make it more of a mystery.

    Other then that it looks interesting :]. Don't take my suggestions as being forceful i just thought they might be helpful. I'll check sometime this week to read the next chapter.
    Its Coming
    Its Coming
    Just a Torchwood fic
    6 years ago
    his name is spelt i a n t o its a fanfic from this show called Torchwood
    That makes much more sense now okay :) my apologies
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