FemaleUnited StatesMember since 3 Aug 12Age 18Last online 1 years ago

HI
Wellllll.
Some of my favorites are: The Hunger Games Trilogy, though I hate the ending. The Hush Hush series, Divergent series, The Mortal Instruments, and the Narnia Chronicles ���� <3 and many many more!
IIf you need help or advice I'm here!

  • Just a user
    OMG!!! Pleassseeee update!! I'm begging you..!!
    Back to the begining
    Back to the begini...
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    Roxaan is plagued by a dream that has been happening every night since her twin sister went missing on their fifth birthday party. she finds out a lot more about her life in due time, after everything...
    K311YB34R
    3 years ago
    Exams are overs nw XD definTly babe :*
  • Just a user
    Love the quote in the beginning, very ironic that you selected something said from Hoover. --= "It wasn't the moment we were finally liberated that I felt open on the inside again."
    When you say "When we reached Limerick," start a new paragraph.
    I love the description and choice of words. There are a few commas that needs to be placed between sentences.
    Second paragraph, "Starting a new life was very challenging," start a new paragraph.
    So far, it seems very eerie and interesting, however to keep it not boring and unexciting, I would suggest to please give more detail about this St in the first paragraph.
    Fourth paragraph: And you could just say 'town centre,' same meaning.
    Sixth p. italicize what Ade said. And is Ade and the main character siblings or lovers? You need to make everything clear for new readers, tell background and main plot lines/climax of the prequel. And to warm up people's memories for those who did read it.
    Since your story is in past p.o.v it kind of gives it a gloomy, "Dracula" setting. (A compliment, if you're trying to be scary/strange/odd, what you're trying to achieve). The way that you describe what has happened is similar to "To Kill A Mockingbird," minus all the advanced vocabulary. It kind of gets boring after a while. And I wouldn't suggest you use past participle for the next chapter, rather than the present. I'm thinking it would be awesome if you experienced all of these in present!
    I hope I wasn't too harsh on comments. But, good job! Loved it. :)
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    Sequel to 'Deliver Us From Evil'. Even after nine long years Aiden and Ava are still combating to disremember their horrific past that still haunts them. But what lengths will each damaged soul go to try...
  • Just a user
    You can copy and paste on your phone using movellas just so you know lol this has happened to me before!:)
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    When Emily is told she is moving in with a brand new family- She panics. She never fit in anywhere, how is she supposed to fit in with a new family? But maybe, a Romeo and Juliet fanatic will help her...
    justaoifethings
    3 years ago
    Nah, it's on my laptop but my Microsoft thingy ran out so I have to retype it on another thing called kingsoft :)
    Just a user
    3 years ago
    Oh writing on google docs is a good idea. you could write both in your laptop and there, then you paste whatever you don't have. Lol
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