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  • John Dannials

    I will read your story

    I will read your story if you read mine. I will only read your story if you comment on mine and write (Dimond) in your reply.

    The Forgotten PrinceAmilia’s diary age 12 December 15th 1886 Christmas is different for me, where others get surrounded with gifts, warm fires and happy faces, I get locked...

    The Forgotten Prince

    (Summary Of My Story)
    Amilia’s diary age 12 December 15th 1886
    Christmas has always been different for me. As others are surrounded by gifts and happy faces and warm fires... I am locked up. Imprisoned alone, in this plain windowless room that more resembles a prison cell.

    My crime... my genes. Some condition possibly passed to me by my mother, my real mother. Now it sounds as if I resent my mother, But I don’t...I miss her....

    It always starts the day the snow falls. Indeed I am lonesome when forced to become a prisoner in my own room and the fact it's right after my birthday only makes me lonelier still.

    Yet I would love to see the snow, even just once. I know what your thinking, but no, I’m not even allowed to look out of the windows because the doctors have said it could make me very sick.
    I have seen what snow looks like in the various pictures and paintings around the house, I don't understand how such a beautiful looking thing could have taken her away.

    I don’t want my father to know how bad this makes me feel, he is in too much pain himself, but I also don’t know how long I can hold all this back.

    Do you know how it feels to inherit a potential sickness, Its not as though they can prove I have it, but father is unwilling to take the risk.
    So do I become what he wants just to keep him happy and keep everything working in order? I want to prove him wrong, but what if he is not wrong? If I did get outside and into the snow and fell ill as she did, what would my father do but blame himself, I couldn't do that to him, but it’s still not fair to me.
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  • John Dannials

    The Forgotten Prince

    The Forgotten PrinceAmilia’s diary age 12 December 15th 1886 Christmas is different for me, where others get surrounded with gifts, warm fires and happy faces, I get locked...



    Amilia’s diary age 12 December 15th 1886

    Christmas has always been different for me. As others are surrounded by gifts and happy faces and warm fires... I am locked up. Imprisoned alone, in this plain windowless room that more resembles a prison cell.

    My crime... my genes. Some condition possibly passed to me by my mother, my real mother. Now it sounds as if I resent my mother, But I don’t...I miss her....

    It always starts the day the snow falls. Indeed I am lonesome when forced to become a prisoner in my own room and the fact it's right after my birthday only makes me lonelier still.

    Yet I would love to see the snow, even just once. I know what your thinking, but no, I’m not even allowed to look out of the windows because the doctors have said it could make me very sick.
    I have seen what snow looks like in the various pictures and paintings around the house, I don't understand how such a beautiful looking thing could have taken her away.

    I don’t want my father to know how bad this makes me feel, he is in too much pain himself, but I also don’t know how long I can hold all this back.

    Do you know how it feels to inherit a potential sickness, Its not as though they can prove I have it, but father is unwilling to take the risk.
    So do I become what he wants just to keep him happy and keep everything working in order? I want to prove him wrong, but what if he is not wrong? If I did get outside and into the snow and fell ill as she did, what would my father do but blame himself, I couldn't do that to him, but it’s still not fair to me.

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