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  • John Amoraten
    Thanks Sapphire :) I'm looking forward to reading your story too this weekend- just read first chapter and will check out the rest later
    Dark Lane
    Dark Lane
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    A dark tale told from several different perspectives...
  • John Amoraten
    Well written, thought provoking and descriptive- I loved it! The shocking image in the first chapter really set the scene for the rest of the story. Notes to self- must check out more of your writing when I get the chance- hope you don't mind I've added you to my fan list and looking forward to reading more!
    Angels of Mercy
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    Hola, I've entered another movella for the Crime Comp called "My Love is a Bloodied Red Rose", as I'm not sure where to take this one. Thanks. The sequel to Sex Crime 2012 and sKorpiO. Valentina and...
  • John Amoraten
    I like the undertones of this piece- I'm looking forward to see how it ends too. You write in a compelling style that make me want to read more.

    I liked the way in which you introduced the characters in the first two chapters and elaborabed on the story.

    Either way, I'm hooked already abd looking forward to see how this story pans out.

    Huge thumbs up from me!
    The Wild Ones
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    First place winner of the september crime competition. Peter and Mary, just two people out of the millions that dwell in an overpopulated, overly controlled city. Forced daily to escape arrest just for...
    D.B. Fairless
    5 years ago
    I always have the ending sorted out before I write anything so believe me when I say it's a good one :D thanks for the nice comment I'll do my best to keep you entertained
  • John Amoraten
    Thank you for sharing this poetic turn
    A touching testament to someone who is yet to know
    About their writing I'm yet to learn
    PS I love the way in which your poem does flow

    I'm just scratching the surface of what you have written here (being a newbie!). Everything I have seen encourages me to read more. Looking forward to reading more as we speak (zooms off to see more of your poetry!) :)
    Dedications
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    Just to show how devoted I am to my loyal fans. In this movella each chapter will be a poem dedicated to each of my fans. It may take a while to write them all so please be patient! Love you fans!
    WriterMan
    5 years ago
    haha thanks, I'm very glad you like my poetry. And if you're a newbie... then welcome too movellas! ;) I look forward to seeing your writing in due course. If you had a spare minute, I'd appreciate your opinion on 'Love Found'... thank you.
  • John Amoraten
    Thank you for sharing this piece. You are a natural storyteller. I felt compelled to continue reading after the first chapter, and I'm so glad I continued to the end of this story- I would encourage anyone else to do the same.

    You write in such a compelling way I hope you don't mind if I take a look at some of your other Movellas.

    For such a short piece this has a huge amount of impact. I am encouraged and enthused to read more of your stories. Thank you for sharing this story. You made me think of my own mortality.

    Anyone who happens to read this post- I would seriously recommend this as a good read.

    ...I'm new to Movellas, but to say the least I would love to read more of your work. Favourited and added as a fan- I would dare anyone who reads this story to say otherwise.

    A perfect short story.
    The Telegram
    The Telegram
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    On a rainy night in 1944, twenty-one year old Mari Lawrence receives the news that everyone dreads - their loved one has been killed in action. For Mari, it is her husband. After enduring shock and grief,...
    Y. Nirvana
    5 years ago
    Thank you so much! I have never received such praise before! I would love to hear your thoughts on some of my other pieces although they are of different writing styles and genres - some of which I'm not particularly keen on :P Thanks for reading :)
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