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  • Darkness Dawns (working title)
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  • Joe
    5 years agoReply
    Thanks for the comments ^^ I can see what you mean that the prologue is too long I'm just not really sure where I would break it up at the moment, everything feels too necessary, but I'll certainly look into it.

    And I'll definitely give all your movellas a read as soon as i can :)
    Darkness Dawns (working title)
    Darkness Dawns (wo...
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    This is something I've dabbled in writing on and off for some time and I wanted to see whether it was worth sticking out and finishing as a real book. It's a sword and sorcery tale, with magic, swords,...
  • Joe

    Need critics!

    5 years agoReply
    Looking for some comments/feedback on my book prologue "Darkness dawns (working title)"

    It's a sword and sorcery style story which I'm HOPING to turn into a full book, just want to see if its worth it first.

    Will happily reviews others in return :)
  • Joe

    Need critics!

    5 years agoReply
    Looking for some comments/feedback on my book prologue "Darkness dawns (working title)"

    It's a sword and sorcery style story which I'm HOPING to turn into a full book, just want to see if its worth it first.

    Will happily reviews others in return :)
    Alex Catt
    5 years ago
    Sounds good, I'll give it a read!
  • Joe

    Need critics!

    5 years agoReply
    Looking for some comments/feedback on my book prologue "Darkness dawns (working title)"

    It's a sword and sorcery style story which I'm HOPING to turn into a full book, just want to see if its worth it first.

    Will happily reviews others in return :)
  • Joe

    Feedback

    5 years agoReply
    Looking for some comments/feedback on my book prologue "Darkness dawns (working title)"

    It's a sword and sorcery style story which I'm HOPING to turn into a full book, just want to see if its worth it first.

    Will happily reviews others in return :)



    Shawnee Rose
    5 years ago
    I'll gadly take a look at your story, if you'd so kindly take a look at my story Soul. :)
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