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  • Jess_98

    Constructive Criticism please! :)

    4 years agoReply
    Hi,

    I have written a story for the 'Feral Youth' competition called,' Run Like Fire' and I was wondering if anybody could give me some feedback on my chapter. I don't write very often, which is bad, but I want to know how to improve.

    Thanks :) :)
  • Jess_98
    4 years agoReply
    This is an excellent analysis of the 2012 games. I love your style of writing and detailed research; well done.
    London 2012: Looking Back
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    A recap of the London 2012 Olympic Games and a way to recapture the magic and glory of the XXX Olympiad. From the Opening Ceremony to the gold medal winners, the athletes to the venues in which they competed,...
    B. Anonymous
    4 years ago
    Thanks again! You've been so kind to me with your feedback, so I think at some point I'm going to have to exchange the favour :-) Any particular requests?
  • Jess_98
    4 years agoReply
    This is an amazing piece of work. You are very talented! :)

    Keep up the good work. I love your analysis as an additional add on to your interpretation of 'The Colour Purple.'
    The White Girl's Game of House
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    Based on “The Color Purple” by Alice Walker. As extra work for English, my teacher set the task of writing a short story and analysis of that story as based on a novel that I’ve read. This, funnily enough,...
    B. Anonymous
    4 years ago
    Thank you! I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier but I've been a bit scatter-brained recently-all comments are appreciated and yours was especially nice. Thank you :-)
  • Jess_98
    4 years agoReply
    I really love this piece. It is really well written and I love the sarcastic tongue and cheek. This piece reminded my of the book' Diary of a Chav.' This has really good attention to detail.
    Good Luck and I hope you win!
    You deserve it! :)
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    Winner of the Feral Youth Competition. ‘Chavvy’ Chelsee Barne has hair extensions and tracksuits; ‘Chavvy’ Chelsee Barne will bite and she will steal if need be; but ‘Chavvy’ Chelsee Barne has a voice...
    B. Anonymous
    4 years ago
    Wow, thank you! Your comment honestly meant a lot to me :-) Are you entering per chance, because if you are I'd be happy to help with your entry? Thanks again.
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