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  • A Game of Lies and Thrones
    A Game of Lies and...
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    by JenRae
  • The Electives
    The Electives
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  • JenRae
    2 years agoReply
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    Wow this really is amazing! The characterization was great! There is really nothing to critique about this except maybe making sure not to use the same word too much. Such as shuttle, you could call the shuttle a train, or something similar just so that every sentence doesn't say something along the lines of "The shuttle ____" But it's just a suggestion. I really like it!
    Albyn
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    Immortality was given as a gift to the race of Guardians for their help in a war millenniums ago. But when the immortal race begin to be murdered, the rulers of Albyn will do anything to cover it up. They...
    WinterSoldier
    2 years ago
    Thank you so much and I'm glad you liked it. I didn't want to refer to it as a train because in this world, shuttles aren't known as trains. I will try and think of something else to call it (perhaps a 'craft'). Thank you again :D
  • JenRae

    mumbled " Feedback Needed!"

    2 years agoReply
    Hey guys! So I'm thinking of using my story A Game of Lies and Fools for an English project I have to do. I was wondering if someone could read it and give me some feedback? It doesn't even have to be positive at all! Just honest! Thanks!
    WinterSoldier
    2 years ago
    I'll give you some feedback! Do you think you could look at my story 'Albyn' in exchange?
    JenRae
    2 years ago
    Of course! :)
    JenRae
    2 years ago
    I've read yours and left a comment :) @[WinterSoldier]
  • JenRae
    3 years agoReply
    Wow this sounds so interesting! I can't wait for the first chapter eeekk! Better written prologue than an entire book I could write haha!
    When They Came
    When They Came
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    Jessica and Larry Davis are a newly-wed couple. When they gave their wedding vows, they did so entrusting to live happily ever after. That was before the hoard came. *Not a walking dead fan fiction*
    MrBieber
    3 years ago
    haha thank you so much! <3
  • JenRae

    mumbled "Hello!"

    3 years agoReply
    Hey! I'm new to Movellas and joined because it seemed like a cooler version of wattpad since they have the contests and role playing forums and such. Follow me on wattpad for more stories (Probably updating quicker on there, sorry). My username is JenRae
    MrBieber
    3 years ago
    Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy <3
    Welcome to movellas and great choice! :P Need anything? Im always available! <3
    JenRae
    3 years ago
    Thanks! Nice to meet you :)
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