FemaleMember since 3 Jun 12Last online 5 years ago

Hi to everyone, so I only joined movellas recently but I definitely think I'm in my element! I love to write but mostly about personal experiences because if I put myself into my writing, then I put my emotions and personality into it, which I think connects the reader to the writing. So enjoy my writing and don't be afraid to comment and give constructive critism. Thanks :)

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  • Jenni
    5 years agoReply
    Wow will I LOVED this last chapter! I almost forgot it was your writing and I thought I was actually reading a published book! Well done! :)
    Jorvik Tales
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    A thrilling fantasy story set in Viking York. Old Man Winter invades the city and steals one of their most priceless artefacts, bedlam ensues and one outspoken Viking, Ingvar, takes himself to Dublin and...
  • Jenni
    5 years agoReply
    Thanks I'll keep working On it!
    A day of disastrous events
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    A little recount of something that happened to me today. Hope you enjoy it.
  • Jenni
    5 years agoReply
    Ok so there's not much there yet but I would really appreciate any constructive critism thanks :3
    A day of disastrous events
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    A little recount of something that happened to me today. Hope you enjoy it.
  • Jenni
    5 years agoReply
    This really is very good will but just a few things to improve on: some of the tenses don't match up eg. It says 'sat' Instead of sitting in chapter 1 and some punctuation and spelling could be corrected too but overall, an incredible start to what I think, will turn out to be a very professionally written book! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!! P.s I'll run through the other details at school with you if you want?!
    Jorvik Tales
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    A thrilling fantasy story set in Viking York. Old Man Winter invades the city and steals one of their most priceless artefacts, bedlam ensues and one outspoken Viking, Ingvar, takes himself to Dublin and...
  • Jenni
    5 years agoReply
    Please please do more your writing is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter! Any idea when it'll be ready????
    Passion (15+)
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    When the 16 years old girl called Emily, decided to go for a trip to Brighton, UK, with three of her best friends, she didn't imagine running into a guy that would change her life completely. Their plans...
    Emily A. H.
    5 years ago
    Awwe thanks!
    It's done now!
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