FemaleCanadaMember since 11 Dec 13Last online 2 years ago

Just a quirky lil chic with a flair for writing.

If you want me to view specifically your writing and help you on something you need to fix please do the same for my writing!

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  • jellybeanjuli
    Really good book, I love the idea! One thing I think you could edit about it is slowing it down and adding more details, explain how she felt, etc
    Secrets...
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    Secrets... is about a teenage girl with a very big secret that only her best friend knows. She is a new kid in town and her life is about to get really crazy. She meets a guy who she likes and wants to...
    heyitsme-LexieMarie
    Thanks! I will definitely try that! Love the help
  • jellybeanjuli
    Sounds great so far, but you really need to slow down and describe more. "Explode the moment" as they say in my English class.
    The Twilight Games
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    *WILL BE ENTERED IN THE CROSSOVER COMPETITION* Ever wondered what it would be like if the Twilight characters were put into the Annual Hunger Games...Against each other? In this Movella, you get the romance...
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