FemaleUnited StatesMember since 26 Sep 15Last online 2 years ago

I am young adult that enjoys writing. I purposely chose movellas to publish my stories because I hope the comments and feedback from others will help me become a better writer.

  • Jeanne E. Trapp
    Good thoughts: The plot is very strong and is well structure that I the reader am intrigue to read more. I also like the sub-main characters narrations as well.

    Bad thoughts: The description of the other characters are a bit weak. My advice is don't be afraid to describe in grand and great detail of your characters and how you imagine them to be.

    Overall, I think you have something good working here :) Oh and I'm rooting for Niall!
    Jet Black Heart
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    Octavia Hood was a good girl before Calum went away but then he left. She gets sent on tour with her brother suddenly cause of behavior and they are shocked in her sudden change. What will they do to get...
    Caitlin😈
    2 years ago
    Awe thanks! Sorry I just got around to see this.
    Caitlin😈
    2 years ago
    I will definitely use your advice.
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