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'We wake up sometimes, just enough to know that we are dreaming'
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Currently working on 'Coffee Shops and Galleries'

  • Jasmine Green
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    Haven't read it yet, but looks really interesting, will tell you what I think when I've read it x
    Boarding school for the difficult
    Boarding school...
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    The year is 1941 and Elizabeth's father is a strict headmaster of an all boys boarding school for delinquents. She's bored and forbidden to speak with the boys. When a new music teacher and troubled student...
    AnnonymousStorm
    1 days ago
    Thank you! And have you read it yet?! :)
    Jasmine Green
    22 hours ago
    Just read it and it is great! The story so far captures my interest, and you can really tell the period it's set in. The different points of view actually work really well instead of confusing it like in some stories, and It'd be good to have more of Williams POV in the next chapters. I Look forward to reading more x
  • Jasmine Green

    mumbled "Auburn Hair"

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    'Hesitant to learn to love
    She touches me with breaths of air
    Long glances to my tilted face
    The gale of her life in my hair

    Tenderness would be the word
    Pulling petals from a flower
    The urgency to see her face
    Sweeping the skies every hour

    Raw energy in her tame-fire locks
    And fury entangled with her frame
    Lust was never the reason, yet
    I wouldn't want to douse her flame'

    - Auburn Hair, Jasmine Green

    Thought I'd also share the full poem on here. Please leave any feedback or comments on my movella, I'd love to hear what you think.
    P O E T R YA collection of poems portraying what's going on inside my head. Each one is in a different mood, or a different setting, usually described by the title....

    J x
  • Jasmine Green

    mumbled "NEW POEM"

    Trying something a little different and using subtle rhyming in my last poem. Please visit my movella and leave feedback as I love hearing what you think!
    P O E T R YA collection of poems portraying what's going on inside my head. Each one is in a different mood, or a different setting, usually described by the title....

    J x
  • Jasmine Green

    mumbled "Not entering competition"

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    I've abandoned my attempt at writing for the monster competition. Just finding it really hard to write even though I've got all the ideas and plotted each chapter. Might write a short story version nearer the deadline, I'll see how much time I have.
    Really just want to focus on my romance 'Coffee Shops and Galleries'. You can read the first chapter here:
    Coffee Shops and GalleriesTanya spends half her life in coffee shops and galleries, studying for her art degree. She finds inspiration and solace in those favourite places, but...

    J x
  • Jasmine Green

    mumbled "NEW POEM"

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    'I'm blooming
    Soft white and veins
    Touching life's petals
    Carving the shape
    into my skin

    Bluebells in my head
    Scented ringing
    Wind kissed spells
    Carried on my breath

    My muddied soul
    Rediscovering grass-swept
    Ideas, feelings,
    Hedge-backwards days

    Cut in my vase
    Stagnant and stilled
    I remember peacefully
    The primrose-beauty
    In truly being alive'

    - Daffodil Days, Jasmine Green

    Posted a new poem to my collection, please leave feedback as I really do appreciate it!

    P O E T R YA collection of poems portraying what's going on inside my head. Each one is in a different mood, or a different setting, usually described by the title....


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    Jasmine Green
    2 weeks ago
    Thank you @[jubjubird] I try to make it beautiful x
    3 SECOND LUKE
    1 weeks ago
    Love this poem! Beautifully written. Any idea if you are going to make these poems into stories?
    Jasmine Green
    1 weeks ago
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    Thanks @[3 SECOND LUKE] :) I wasn't thinking of developing them into anything, but that might work as a concept x
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