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  • JasminaWood
    6 years agoReply
    Heyy... wow this is really good :) Don't know if you remember, but you asked me to write a short story about my poem 'That other girl' Wel i have, and it's finished, if you want have a read, it's only a couple of really short chapters, but if you'd have the time, i'd love forr you to read it.
    P.S it's no where as good as yours :D x
    The confessions of a Teenage Outcast
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    Description: Mila is what you call average. Nothing more, nothing less. She tends to hide out in her room or as she calls it, her sanctuary. She doesn't expect anything from anyone, not even her parents,...
    JasminaWood
    6 years ago
    So.. what did you think, i know it's not good, it's my first, and some advice would be really helpful <3
    Jodie Angell
    6 years ago
    I really enjoyed reading it, its a good start :D! sorry i forgot to leave a comment haha!<3
    Jodie Angell
    6 years ago
    I really enjoyed reading it, its a good start :D! sorry i forgot to leave a comment haha!<3
  • JasminaWood
    6 years agoReply
    Hi, managed to find this, through you comennting on someone elses poem. When i read that you were 10 and already writing poetry, i couldn't believe it, so i decided to take a look. And wow... your really talanted! If you love writing, then keep going, cause i think you have a great future ahead of you. Have a look at mine if you like, but otherwise, well done! Keep going!
    St. Valentine
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    poetry for St. Valentine
  • JasminaWood
    6 years agoReply
    Wow... This is really good. It's so descriptive, and beautiful. Obviously your amazing at writing. Generally hope you win, you deserve it ;) If you have the tim, would you mind giving me some constructive criticism? x
    The Chestnut Tree
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    My entry for the Love competition. The Chestnut Tree that allows the young couples to seek respite from the scorching sunlight and judgement itself, towers above all, and silently ponders the boundless,...
    Caiitliin
    6 years ago
    thank you so much! i'm not that good, in all honesty, i just read a lot of books. and of course x
  • JasminaWood
    6 years agoReply
    Umm... it's actually quite intresting. Quite unique, but i get where your coming from. If you have the time, mind checking mine out? :)
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