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Hi guys my names Jamila and I have always loved writing but I've never really had any proper criticism and I would really love your just anything that I could improve on thanks heaps! Hope you enjoy

  • Jammy1380
    5 years agoReply
    This is really good! Please update
    Legacy
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    Marine never met her mother, never needed to, she had everything she had always wanted. When she discovers a dying mermaid outside her house, and the locket she protects, Marine's life will be turned upside...
  • Jammy1380
    5 years agoReply
    This is really good! I love the fact you have let us anticipate what is going to happen its very good! Just watch out for some missing words!:)
    Love it and all your book?
    Eternal darkness (cover competition)
    Eternal darkness...
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    A cover for the competition, and an excerpt of a new book my mind has been working on
  • Jammy1380
    5 years agoReply
    UPDATE,!!!
    Pregnancy Love
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    It all happened the night my parents kicked me out because of my apparent drinking and drug addiction, which for those of you who don’t know is no where near true, I did drink a little but who doesn't...
  • Jammy1380
    5 years agoReply
    This is really good please write another chapter!!
    I Loved You
    I Loved You
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    After marrying pop sensation Harry Styles, 20 year old Kyle has the news that she's pregnant. Everything is going great, until Harry's drunken mistake. Could that be the end of their marriage? Or can love...
  • Jammy1380
    5 years agoReply
    Thanks
    Moment in time
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    Can my day get any better!? Having my 18th birthday with my best friends Robyn and Olivia the biggest party animals on this planet, and receiving a mysterious letter with three meet and greet tickets to...
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