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Only just gotten into writing. Short time writer. Long time surfer. Eternal dreamer

  • James1234
    5 years agoReply
    Wow. So emotional, great story! Why do girls always think that skinny is perfect?
    Perfection.
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    This is my entry for the fashion competition. I chose to do the model storyline. I listened to Hallelujah by Rufus Wainwright when writing this. Please comment and click like if you like it!
    Em :)
    5 years ago
    Thankyou :) and i guess because of society?
    Chris123
    5 years ago
    I agree with you dude, i think every girl needs to realise that she is beautiful in her own way.
    Em :)
    5 years ago
    aw thats so true!
  • James1234
    5 years agoReply
    Wow this was really good! not as good as some of your others but definitely a great story, keep writing!
    Fools.
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    Hunted. Chased like an animal. Can Aradia escape them? Or will she join the many of her people left to rot within the earth?
    Beth...
    5 years ago
    oh okay, thank you James!
  • James1234
    6 years agoReply
    Are you going to write more of this?
    Until death do us part
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    A short story that I've been working on for this competition. I really hope you like it! 'I have been on this earth for only a mere moment, but soon I shall be gone for an eternity. But, even when...
    Em :)
    6 years ago
    YEAH DO MORE!
    James1234
    6 years ago
    Yeah i was gonna say, please write more! :)
    Beth...
    6 years ago
    haa i think i might, but I'm working on something else at the moment so.... I will let you know if i do! thanks for the support! x
  • James1234
    6 years agoReply
    great original idea! keep going
    My Subjects and I
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    I really know what to call this. It's just a little experiment that I've been thinking of for a while now, what if our school subjects were actually people? This isn't supposed to be realistic, or deep...
    HanEps
    6 years ago
    thanks :D i wasnt sure if it would work, but im going to try my best, and see how it works out! im glad you liked it!!!
    geoffrey stuart
    6 years ago
    HI I like this very much It remind me of a radio story I once wrote by including the name in the conversation one doesn’t need to say she said asked or replied it works well in this short piece never tried it on a long story interesting narration.
    HanEps
    6 years ago
    HI! im glad you like it! i wanted to write something with a continuous dialogue, where i would have to keep interjecting who said what, and it seemed to work well with this kind of story so im glad you think it works too! im going to try adding a few more chapters and see how it goes, but i dont htink that this is the kind of thing that you can overly complicate! thank you for the comment, much appreciated :D!!!
  • James1234
    6 years agoReply
    really good beth, sounds like you're talking about a storm or something but maybe you're talking about the raging war within you, about your emotions. Really good
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    A poem a wrote, can you decipher the message weaved within the words? :D
    Beth...
    6 years ago
    maybe maybe not it's up to interpretation :D
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