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  • I Met Him in Teldrassil
    I Met Him in Teldr...
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    by Jade
  • Jade
    5 years agoReply
    I like a lot of the ideas/concepts in your story. I do play WoW and found all the detail -especially about the changes Cataclysm brought- to be well done. For me, personally, as a reader, the paragraphs were a little on the long side. But, that's probably just a personal preference and not necessarily something anyone else would be bothered by. I really liked it.
    Ashes And Arrows: The Bright Fire
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    A novel involving my former WoW character Ashe and her adventures. After the horrid destruction of Kezan caused by Deathwing tearing through the heart of the world we know as Azeroth, Âshe finds herself...
    Relaxation
    5 years ago
    Either way, thanks for the feedback. I want to put in as many details as possible to immerse the reader into the story, which then results in a longer paragraphs, something I am actually working to cut down on, maybe jump between stories more or inserting new ones. I value your feedback and thanks for reading.
    Jade
    5 years ago
    Maybe if you have time you could read my story, too and comment. I haven't really previously ever submitted any writing submissions anywhere other than poetry. From our earlier posts, I'm betting you're going to think mine (I Met Him in Teldrassil) doesn't have enough detail? But , I would be interested to see if you find the story appealing at all? Thanks
    Relaxation
    5 years ago
    Absolutely, I'll check it out asap.
  • Jade
    5 years agoReply
    I like a lot of the ideas in your story, lots of interesting concepts. Personally, I found it a little difficult to read because of the spelling and grammatical errors, but those things are fairly easily fixed. As far as the story itself, I would definitely be interested to keep reading to see how it plays out.
    In Pieces
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    This is a piece of World of Warcraft fiction that I was writing on some time ago, but I lost interest, however, with the World of Warcraft Fan Fiction contest, I thought I would upload it and see what...
  • Jade
    5 years agoReply
    I like how you've created a three dimensional character with a real personality in Navimie, not just a WoW "toon".
    The Search for Skarr
    The Search for Ska...
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    Navimie's journey in The Molten Front as she searches for that elusive and beautiful rare spawn cat, Skarr.
    Navimie
    5 years ago
    Ty Jade :)
  • Jade
    5 years agoReply
    As someone who plays WoW,I find it pretty impressive how many details from the game you managed to fit into your story.
    Heroes of the World of Warcraft
    Heroes of the Worl...
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    in a game practically teaming and bursting at the seams with heroes who would care about my little motley crew? well I for one do. In the coming chapters you will read the exploits of these chosen few....
    Walter.Tence
    5 years ago
    why thank you. the only thing I can't 100% recall was if dwarf warriors indeed started with an ax or a hammer, but considering that was like 5 years ago or so now i don't think many would mind the change :)
    Jade
    5 years ago
    You are very welcome. I put a story up in this contest (I Met Him in Teldrassil) yesterday. It is the first time I ever really entered a writing contest , other than poetry contests. No one has commented on mine yet, if you have time maybe you could read it and tell me any thoughts you have on it. Thanks.
  • Jade
    5 years agoReply
    As a WoW player , I really like the way you explain what your weapon is named , " 'Tigerbane' the creator had called it" . Because of course in the game you just mouse over the weapon icon and it shows you the name but for the purposes of a fiction story I think this is a great way to convey the name of your weapon.
    Bolgrim and the Beast
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    Bolgrim Stoutfist, A fellow Dwarf Rifleman is set the task to defeat and Polar Bear killing the local rams. ( A Short Story for the WoW Fan Fiction Competition.)
    Zagoner
    5 years ago
    Hah thank you. It's one of my favirote model daggers in game so I just had to inclue the name! And yeh, It's a shame people don't use their names as much in storys since I think a lot of them have some really nice and suitable names.
    Jade
    5 years ago
    Maybe , if you have time, you can read my entry in this contest (I Met Him in Teldrassil) and put a comment on my page if you have any input. I've never really entered anything in a writing contest before (other than poetry). Thanks
    Zagoner
    5 years ago
    Same here. I'll go and check it out!
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