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  • jacobsgirl
    5 years agoReply
    It was not good. Sorry you just messed up the whole twilight plot and i didn't like it, Bella doesn't fall in love with Jacob. She falls in love with Edward and Edward is nothing like you presented him in your story I had to stop reading it at chapter sixs because it made me sooooo mad.
    Wolf Boy
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    We all know that Jacob and Bella are long time friends. Jacob wants to be more than that. Bella does too. So why can't their undying love flourish? The answer is simple. Edward. He has also been watching...
    Alexa Thorpe
    5 years ago
    I'm completely Team Edward and I thought the way you twisted it was clever! Its your movella, so do what you want with it! Good job!
    J.K. Panesar
    5 years ago
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    Madi you dont need to be sorry to anyone. You simply did what the competition asked. It's their fault if they dont like it. I bet that havent heard of the expression "Have nothing niced to say, dont say it."
    Starfire
    5 years ago
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    Don't be like that! She is doing fine and isn't the point of it to make your own ending? Don't be a jerk, you can just stop reading you don't need to humiliate them on this wall, you are the only negative, maybe that says something about you but I do not mean to come across as mean, but that is just how I am and how I feel. So keep the hate, 'let love grow'. Ok even I thought that was a little corny but you get the idea
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