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Bit of a geek who loves music and writes for fun!

  • J. Archer
    5 years agoReply
    Please comment!
    Big Book of Poetry
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    My first attempt at writing poetry. please comment! J. Archer AKA Geekus
    bobsicle
    5 years ago
    umm.. ok.
    Rhyming is a really tricky thing to do, because you'll find a line you really like but then have to ditch it because nothing rhymes with it!
    It would help make your work easier to read if you thought about how you lay it out; try to separate the lines and break it down into different verses. :)
    bobsicle
    5 years ago
    Sorry, I sounded really patronising! Ignore me; I'm just weird! ;)
  • J. Archer
    5 years agoReply
    sorry, this is first time I have ever attempted to write something! Writing isn't exactly my strong point but can I ask anyone to read this and then tell me if they would like me to carry on or not. Btw aiming to make books really long but exciting! Also check out B. harrison's books! They are awesome!!!
    The devils quest
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    Tom Stinton, Sam Hugo and Ben Chapman and faced with the impossible task of saving mankind as we know it! When the devil attempts to turn the surface world into a land of torture and sadness these three...
    J.K. Panesar
    5 years ago
    This is very good and very well written. I feel as though I you could write more in your chapter. Expand on the characters feelings and emotions. Other than that I love the prologue. Oh and another tip, start a new line when someone different is speaking. It makes it more clear for the reader to read. I love the title, and the blurb is captivating. Your cover is awesome. Keep writing, i have liked and will hope to read more of this. :)
    J.K.
    J. Archer
    5 years ago
    thanks yh i tried that new line thing and it looked like id started a new paragraph! I know how to do it know and thanks for the advice!
  • J. Archer
    5 years agoReply
    wow! I'm loving this soooooooooo much! Get kearsey to show 8rk!!!
    The Last Moon Dragon
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    PSA to idiots on the internet who think it's ok to plagiarise, this story has already been reposted once by a user on wattpad and I (OP / author) reported them immediately. Don't copy and paste other people's...
    Queen of The Dragon-Owls
    haha thanks but nooo wayyyy!! :)
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