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I love reading and writing stories :)

  • ITookTheCookiee
    Hey I posted one of my stories onto your short story competition and wanted to ask if you could remove it please since I am closing my movellas account and going to fanfiction.net thanks! :)
  • ITookTheCookiee
    "His eyes were deep black pits, no possible escape if you fell in. The tousled mane of brown invited you in with a false sense of security, but clinging on to you with a vice like grip."
    WHOA!!
    You're style writing is amazing and instantly drew the reader in. I love it and it's only the prologue! I can't wait for the next chapter!
    Guilt
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    The only one she could ever trust in, she has to let go...
    ITookTheCookiee
    3 years ago
    It's really unique I'm thinking that maybe he was bitten by a vampire or turned into a creature by those two men oooor they were attacked and it was her fault maybe? So that's why she followed him because she felt 'Guilt' haha see what I did there? Put the title in there lol :P
    And wow you did it for GCSE? I wish I was as talented haha x
    Milly1
    3 years ago
    Thank you so much for the comment, it's took me five years to get my order of writing right and this single piece took me three months. Writing takes time, don't rush it! xx :D
    ITookTheCookiee
    3 years ago
    You're welcome and thanks for the advice! xx :)
  • ITookTheCookiee
    Name: Khadra
    Age: 17
    How many Movellas: 1
    Why I love to write: It's a way to express myself too put it simply. I love reading and certain writers have made me feel such a range of emotions that I would like to attempt to do as well and see if I can be as good as them :)
    Short Story Competition
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    Short Story Competition! Enter your short stories here to be in the running to win ultimate promotions from em and feedback from an Australian, published author! :)
    ITookTheCookiee
    3 years ago
    haha oke doke and thanks for putting it up! It's just that my username written at the start of the second chapter has two 'e's in the end instead of one lol but thanks for letting me post my story here anyways!
    Ashlee Renee
    3 years ago
    No worries, I'll fix that up right away!!! :)
    ITookTheCookiee
    3 years ago
    Okay thanks! :)
  • ITookTheCookiee
    Hey I wanted to ask, I wrote a short story for the fault in our stars competition and was wondering if I could post it for this competition? Or is that not allowed? :)
    Short Story Competition
    Short Story Compet...
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    900
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    Short Story Competition! Enter your short stories here to be in the running to win ultimate promotions from em and feedback from an Australian, published author! :)
    Ashlee Renee
    3 years ago
    Go for it! :) You can post whatever you want in it, even if it has been used in another competition :)
    Just enter your details in the comments and I will add you as soon as I have a vacancy in the co-authors section :)
    (May take up o a week but don't worry, you have time :) )
    ITookTheCookiee
    3 years ago
    Okay thanks! :)
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