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"Everything is clearer when you're in love." - John Lennon.

  • Isobel Moon
    5 years agoReply
    Very emotional, and definitely a very strong story, but honestly? I have no-idea what legacy means. I just looked it up on the internet and it says a legacy is something passed down through family, which I suppose generic cancer is. I suggest you go ask an expert, coz I have no idea. Seems alright to me though.
    The Words of a Sentence
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    When Bex discovers she has Cancer, the exact type her mother before her had, she sees it as her duty to pull through, for the sake of her little sister, Cleo. But is it too late? This is a short story...
    Genny Lawrence
    5 years ago
    Well, thanks for that very clear and useful message (how do you type sarcasm?). I read that online too but I'm still not sure. Will go ask some people. Thanks for the like & fave!
  • Isobel Moon
    5 years agoReply
    Another great poem! You really are good at this. Are you ever going to write a happy poem? Happy can be good too lol ;)
    Fault and Blame
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    Who's fault is it really, when a relationship doesn't work out? Who does the blame fall on? This is a short poem telling the sad tale of a poor girl trying to figure it out... (My third entry to the poetry...
    Genny Lawrence
    5 years ago
    Nah, happy is boring. The world would be REALLY rubbish then if everything was happy all the time.
  • Isobel Moon
    5 years agoReply
    I agree with ClearSkies - it is very intense. You don't treat your characters very well do you? One dead, one heartbroken... I fear for the main character of you next movella :)
    So I Did
    So I Did
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    A short poem explaining how one disastrous act, caused by something seemingly harmless, can turn out the worst for everybody... (My second entry for the poetry competition. My first entry, and the positive...
    Genny Lawrence
    5 years ago
    So you should. Happy endings are boring.
  • Isobel Moon
    5 years agoReply
    If anyone is wondering Gennyy and I are the same person, so there is no need to report plagarism x
    I am Pure
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    Read about inside - was too long to fit in the 'About the story' bit (HINT: It's about Sirens, but not as we know them...)
  • Isobel Moon
    5 years agoReply
    Pretty poem Gennyy. Hope u do well in the comp. As far as advise goes, maybe put it into stanzas? I hear poems need those x
    Fixed to be Broken
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    A simple poem telling the tragic tale of a girl, whose heart has been broken one too many times... (My entry for that poetry contest. Poetry isn't my strong point so I am open to all advise and constrictive...
    Genny Lawrence
    5 years ago
    Ok I'll sort it out xx love ya hun
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