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  • Infinite_Exho

    mumbled "Feedback"

    11 months agoReply
    Hey, guys! So, I recently I have gotten some feedback on my story X from the feedback chain and that feedback inspired me so much and I started getting ideas for that story, the first time I got any ideas after 2-3 years of writer's block :) Now, I am rewriting the story (not changing the plot but making it better and making the writing better) and I would love for anyone to check the story out and give any feedback. Anything is appreciated :) This feedback will help me out a lot as I go through the story and make it better. I know this mumble is long and rambly xD but feedback would be great! Link below:

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    XA girl's life destroyed by a war. A boy's life destroyed by an earthquake. They travel on a road towards the unknown.


  • Infinite_Exho
    11 months agoReply
    Hello, I am from the feedback chain :)
    These poems are all so beautiful and each one has so much emotion packed into it. I have no CC because they're all so amazing and sad
    The Red Scarf : Poetry Novella
    The Red Scarf :...
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    “But . . . but Mummy would never leave” “If she could have stopped it, I know she would have Hannah” “No . . . NO! I refuse to believe Mummy did that” “Hannah, please, you need to understand, she couldn’t...
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