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  • Ikbenaukje

    mumbled "Finished!"

    2 years agoReply
    I finally finished writing my book The Head Case, I'll start posting more chapters at January first!
    Love you guys!
    Have fun reading!
    Le Fox
    2 years ago
    Oh, it sounds interesting! I can't wait to read it!
    Ikbenaukje
    2 years ago
    Nice! Hope you'll like it!
  • Ikbenaukje

    mumbled "I feel old"

    2 years agoReply
    OMG I made a twitter 2 days ago. After having so many people tell me I should make one... I probably lived under a rock XD. But what should I do with it now? Sooo if you want to follow me on twitter mine is: @Ikbenaukje (I feel out of inspiration XD)
    How're your days going?
  • Ikbenaukje

    I am my character

    2 years agoReply
    Hi,

    I need some help! I am working on this story with a coldblooded killer and he's really insane, I can write his parts with ease, but now I'm going to write from the POV of one of his victims and I really get pulled in by all my characters so I usually feel what they feel, but now I have a writer's block because I don't want to feel what my coldblooded killer does to his victim.
    Do any of you have experience with this situation, and do any of you have any advice on how to get over this, or to distance my feelings from the ones my main character has?

    Love,
    Aukje
    Ikbenaukje
    2 years ago
    Hey!
    I already fixed the issue, but it is valuable advice! I had forgotten I could write it a 20 times or a 1000 times. Thank you for responding!
  • Ikbenaukje
    2 years agoReply
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    Hi Mirlotta,

    I really love the idea off this book!
    And I agree with Sparrow3183 about the chapter title. LOVE IT!

    so for feedback:
    1. I saw a few mistakes (nothing to disturbin, but you might want to take a look at them later on)
    - Looking back, I should probably have --> Looking back, I probably should have
    - feminsim --> feminism
    2. I really like how you write, and how you describe things (like how she thinks what a criminal should do and be and look like and such)
    3. I really hope to find out a little more about her parents.. (why are they the way they are?)
    4. Continue writing this! I look forward to seeing more chapters.

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    "When I get old," drawled Sorianne slowly, flicking her smile across the table, "I'm going to be richer than my daddy is now. And I don't care if I have to lie, or steal, or plunder my way through life...
    Mirlotta
    2 years ago
    1 Like
    Thanks so much for your feedback! :)
  • Ikbenaukje

    mumbled "Hospitals suck!"

    2 years agoReply
    Ugh why do hospitals have to put you on hold so freaking much, for a 2 minute phonecall I get 30 minutes of waiting, and that without some type of waiting music! WHY? It sucks too much!
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