FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 24 Sep 14Age 17Last online 1 years ago

Hey! I'm Hyacinthia Phoenix and I usually use this site for competitions and reading other peoples work, because I have a fictionpress account and I usually post on that. HOWEVER never fear because sometimes I feel like posting my stuff everywhere because its just that amazing (I am not arrogant AT ALL :P )

Anyway: if you want me to read your stuff I definately will- AND I hope you enjoy my work (if I ever post anything :| )

  • PhHyacinthia
    Continuously trying to escape is probably what I would do, but that way the abductor is more likely to kill you either because you're a nuisance or by accident (trying to stop you). So I might be vaguely annoying, cynical, and sarcastic to get on their nerves, and hope that they decide to leave me by the side of the road after a few hours.
  • PhHyacinthia
    HEEEY! Nice start (it is a start right?) lovin' the storyline!

    Just wanna say some sentances are SUPER long and you might want to consider chopping them down OR using the power of a semi-colon (seriously they're great). But sentance variety is always key, as my english teacher keeps telling me
    The Assassin's Hunt
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    Danika is an Assassin in the city of Nether Valley waiting for her next mission in an overcrowded tavern . Never having met her Boss, she still needs the mission and the money it brings. Many have complimented...
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