FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 2 Feb 14Last online 3 years ago

Hey, guys.

Wat up?

  • hurrysights
    3 years agoReply
    You write well, but you need to put spaces. For example, when a new person speaks, their speech is on a seperate line.

    e.g.
    "Yes," she whispered.

    "No," he growled.

    Plus, when you start a new paragraph, you have a little thumb gap.

    e.g.
    Blah, blah blah blah bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
    Here is the new paragraph, note my gap. Here is the new paraaraph, note my gap. Here is the new paragraph, note my gap. Here is the new paragraph, note my gap. Here is the new paragraph, note my gap. Here is the new paragraph, note my gap. Here is the new paragraph, note my gap.
    Ancient Wars
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    It is a tale that follows the young roman emperor of the west, his secrets and desire to rule the whole of Rome, centuries later he arrives in Willow Creek, and chaos erupts.
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