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i love reading, writing, horses, dragons and pretty much any other animal/mythical creature you can think of. That's pretty much it. :)

  • loulou321
    4 years agoReply
    I love this movella. You describe the scene really well and use a variety of sentence structures. Try and use paragraphs, is the only thing I can think of to improve. The idea's great.
    Look at me.
    Look at me.
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    Erin thinks that she is a normal teenager with a normal life. However, what she doesn't know is that she can control all the elements and control peoples' minds. Shane is a mortal boy who is the most...
    Georgia Stencel
    4 years ago
    Thanks. My computer is kinda weird so it doesn't allow me to make paragraphs. But thanks for reading my movellas, I love it when people tell me what they think about my books. :)
  • loulou321
    4 years agoReply
    It's really good up to now but, to improve, you should add some descriptive language as it makes it more effective to the reader. I love this story and can't wait for the next update!
    Percabeth in Hoggwarts
    Percabeth in Hoggw...
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    Percy Jackson and Annabeth Chase are heading for Europe and get knocked of corse and wake up to find themselves on the Hoggwarts Express. dazed and confused they are mistaken for Hoggwarts students and...
  • loulou321
    4 years agoReply
    i love it but at the end of the chapter don't you think that there'd be a little bit more of a panic when mcgonagall mentioned the chamber of secrets? Other than that this story is fantastic! Pleaseeee update sooonnnn!!!
    I Open At The Close.
    I Open At The Clos...
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    19 years later and, Albus, James, Lily,Rose and Hugo are on their way to Hogwarts. Litlle do they know that the Chamber of Secrets may not have been closed as securely as expected. The five friends get...
  • loulou321
    5 years agoReply
    Make a plea for help from her parents.
    Taken
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    (MA 16+ story) Ebony was a normal girl, living a completely normal life, in what she thought was a normal world. She always pushed the borders of the rules her parents put down for her to follow, always...
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