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"There is nothing either good or bad but thinking makes it so." William Shakespeare

  • Holly51768
    4 years agoReply
    This is great so far :)
    The Nightingale
    The Nightingale
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    Have you ever seen an assassin fail at his job? No, well neither have I, until now! I was all alone in the cave for a long while until my partner returned. But he didn't look himself...
  • Holly51768
    4 years agoReply
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    This is wonderfully written! I love your description and your use of vocabulary is superb. I also think this is quite an unusual piece and I love how we really never know if she travelled in time or not at the end. It's a great short story and you have a really high (the highest) chance of winning! I also felt the characters Nat and Charlotte were not generic and the part about Charlotte missing her parents only made me want to go hug my mom!
    Again, awesome job!!!! Loved reading it :)
    Right Place Right Time
    Right Place Right...
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    "Nat? Do you really think I'm from the 21st century, or do you just think I'm mad?" She exhaled deeply, let my hand go. I looked up nervously. "I know you're mad." (an entry for the 'The Seventh...
    BelleBeauty
    4 years ago
    You're so kind :') Thank you!
  • Holly51768
    4 years agoReply
    Superb writing skills- I think you'll win :)
    Dying to Live
    Dying to Live
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    [The Seventh Miss Hatfield Competition] The man moved closer, so that his lips were at her ear as he whispered the last words of her short little life. “Then die.” Cover done by the incredible River_Summers!
    Prodigy
    4 years ago
    Really?! Wow, thanks!!
  • Holly51768
    4 years agoReply
    This is amazing!
    Why?
    Why?
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    (Rated yellow due to the the content in the prologue) A year ago thirteen year old, Hayden Barrett went missing and was found having been tortured in the basement of an abandoned house. Now a year on,...
  • Holly51768
    4 years agoReply
    Hi guys! (Wow I feel so chatty, I've never commented this much) Just wanted to let everybody know that I will do the current reviews I have now but unfortunately I can't accept anymore for the while. Really sorry, but once I finish theses current ones, I may reconsider taking in more. Sorry to be the Debbie Downer!!
    Movella Reviews
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    Hello everybody! This is a completely unoriginal idea but here I am, starting a movella review report. I can't review anything marked as red (not old enough) but I can read over anything marked green or...
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