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  • hlynam94
    4 years agoReply
    I like the story but live 5 mins from Wolverhampton its a bit hard to believe cos we have pounds and we say streets not blocks sorry I'm kinda annoying for stuff like that but it is goos xx
    The Boy with the curls...
    The Boy with the...
    She was just a normal girl... She lived in Wolverhampton with her Mum and older brother... until one day when she met... him... Harry Styles... He changed her life... And here's her story...
    4 years ago
    4 years ago
    Yeh we say streets aswell but I got told to say blocks not streets because it's more relatable ? I dunno... but thanks for the feedback xx
  • hlynam94
    5 years agoReply
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    I think it's a good story but I'm annoyed about how your dealing with the rape ngl. its like your making rape ok by saying a person was dared to rape someone now their Getting engaged and how easily everyone's taking it. im sorry but I feel like your saying rape is ok and has no consequence. but I do think your writing is good :).
    Little Talks
    Little Talks
    "I don't like walking around this old and empty house." ~ "Are you sure about this Zayn?" I asked with my hands grasping over the railing, wind blowing through my hair. "Don't worry." He tells me. "I'm...
    Raggedy Apple
    5 years ago
    Thanks. I'm trying my best to make all the rape thing not a big deal. I am 1000% against it. But I'm changing direction in the next few chapters. But once again, thanks.
    5 years ago
    Yeah I'm sorry but I agree with hlynam94 because I'm very scared of rape and I know many girls you've delt with rape and it's ruined their life so I'm quite upset that your treating it like nothing.. I'm enjoying this book I just don't like this part :/ please improve
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