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Dirty little secret is being completely changed, and will not be getting published on movellas Anymore :L

  • Hejecki
    2 months agoReply
    The secret place, now that is a book to read, slightly confusing at first but when you get into it, when you're trying to guess, no, work out, along with the detectives who the killer is, you really won't want to put the book down for a second. Reading between the lies , and getting to know the characters is an amazing experience that I would recommend to anybody and everybody. So if you haven't read it already, then what are you waiting for?

    I know who killed him. Do you?
  • Hejecki
    1 years agoReply
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    I really like the first stanza, and how it is repeated also as the imagery created sticks in your mind. Also, you've really captured how a writer thinks.
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    WriterMan
    1 years ago
    thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm glad you like my writing. :)
  • Hejecki
    1 years agoReply
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    I actually really like this, and usually I cannot stand poetry for the life of me. Although I wasn't too sure on what some of the words meant, it added a slight flair of mystery which I rather enjoyed. Only bad thing I can really say is it doesn't completely flow throughout yet, in the verses itself it goes rather well. I'd love to see some more work from you, it's quite good. :)
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    WriterMan
    1 years ago
    thank you very much. I shall work on the flow, please check out some more of my poems on here if you wish.
  • Hejecki

    Really need feedback please?

    1 years agoReply
    I would really love it of some of you read 'dirty little secret' and tell me what you think please? X
  • Hejecki
    1 years agoReply
    I can't decide if I like it or not, personally I think it needs a tad more detail but well done :)
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