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Check out my story Our Years, on its brand new audiobook!

Eve Smallman AUDIOBOOK:o Thank you ^_^
3 years ago
  • Eve Smallman AUDIOBOOK
    Nice! You have a very unique concept, I'd suggest either making the chapters shorter or separating the paragraphs as it's kind of clunky and Josephine is a great, non-Mary Sue character :)

    Mind checking out mine?
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    "I can't remember a life before you, but then it hit me." © Copyright of Orange Beanie 2014. All Rights Reserved.
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    Our Years*Winner of the Worlds Best 1D Fanfiction Writer* They say your soulmate will always find you. But what they didn't say is that they will find you, then...
  • Eve Smallman AUDIOBOOK
    Goooood! You've got good description, maybe rate this as Yellow if there's going to be swearing and the blurb is very chilling :)

    Mind checking out mine?

    Our Years*Winner of the Worlds Best 1D Fanfiction Writer* They say your soulmate will always find you. But what they didn't say is that they will find you, then...
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    "Just because I don't have a body doesn't mean I don't have feelings for you." -His breath was ice cold as he whispers into my neck.
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    3 years ago
    Why thank, and this is my first time writing here so thank you very much for that! And I would love to read it :D
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    My pleasure :) and thanks!
  • Eve Smallman AUDIOBOOK
    Great! I like how much depth the blurb goes into, maybe have the blurb chapter in italics so it's clear it's separate to the story and your story concept is intriguing :)

    Mind checking out mine?

    Our Years*Winner of the Worlds Best 1D Fanfiction Writer* They say your soulmate will always find you. But what they didn't say is that they will find you, then...
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    The Wartner School program has an activity that makes it different from every school in the U.K. An activity that not everybody likes but some people dream about. An activity that they call the T.W.H.L.S....
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    Thank you :)
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