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  • grayer92
    5 years agoReply
    this is exciting. The pace reminiscent of a car chase, alas your opening chapter, and the twist at the end is really surprising.
    The one thing I think you need to do however is re-edit this a bit. The first sentence in the first chapter the wording is off and seems to be missing a word. I don't know about anyone else, but I'm looking forward to what is next for Calico.
    Black Cat was everything to Calico - brother, teacher, saviour... and traitor? Calico couldn't accept that the one person she could remember trusting would betray so brazenly. But now she was on the run,...
    Thank you! I'll definitely get round to that. I'm really glad you like my story!
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