FemaleIrelandMember since 16 Oct 14Age 17Last online 3 hours ago

Hello there, you wonderful human!

My name is Niamh (Neev). I'm 17 years old, and I'm from Ireland. I really love to write, read, draw, and act! Some of my accomplishments in writing include:

> Winner of the Movellas 7 Days Competition (2015) with my story 'Iniside Looking Out'
> Winner of the Movellas Alternate Universe Competition (2017) with my story 'The Rose'
> Wrote several articles from Mimp Mag
> Work experience at a national newspaper here in Ireland called 'The Irish Times'

If you have any suggestions for story ideas, or have any constructive criticism for my stories, I would love to hear it! Just comment on a story of mine.

Enjoy, and have a fantastic day!

  • GoToTheGalaxy

    mumbled "Hamilton Read-A-Thon?"

    1 months agoReply
    Hi everyone! I'm just wondering if anyone on here would be interested in participating in a year long read-a-thon based on Hamilton: An American Musical. Message me if you're interested, and if you'd like to know more!
  • GoToTheGalaxy
    2 months agoReply
    I'm here for the feedback chain :)

    This was very well written! The descriptions were so well done. I really liked the concept as well, though I found it quite confusing at some points. Luckily, you cleared up the confusions quickly, so I didn't lose interest. I did find the love story to be a bit too quickly put together, but in saying that, I loved the love story part. The characters were very interesting and well written. This is on of the best stories I've read on Movellas! Well done <3
    Paper Forests
    Paper Forests
    “While your children and grandchildren are away, I like to think that they’re visiting a fantastic place, somewhere where they aren’t restrained by an illness or held back by their own emotions. I like...
  • GoToTheGalaxy
    2 months agoReply
    Hi! I've been assigned to read this story for the Post Summer Vacation Feedback chain. This is my feedback:
    I really love this story! It has a very original concept, and the fact that it's told in multiple points of view makes it even more interesting to read.
    In the beginning, I found that there were a few paragraphs that just told the reader what the rules of the world were. I think you could improve this by slowly drawing out how the world worked over several paragraphs, instead of an info dump. However, I did notice that you didn't info dump half as much as the chapters continued, which was great!!
    I think the concept is very strong, and the world is very intriguing. You seem too really know the world, and because of this, as readers we feel like we know it too. I think if you continue writing this story, the world will expand really well.
    One thing I noticed in the first chapter was that there was a slight inconsistency with the tone of language. Aliana spoke like a modern day teenager, which would be fine, if it weren't set in a world where all the nobles speak very differently to that of a modern day teenager.
    Finally, I think the characters are really well done,and the writing was simple to understand and suited the story. I don't like Aliana very much at all, but I think you made her that way for a reason, and readers aren't supposed to like her until she develops to be less prejudiced, correct? I loved how sassy Lin was, but how she also knew that her sass had a cost. I find that in typical YA, the characters are sassy without thinking of the consequences, but Lin wasn't like that, which I appreciated. I also love Raphael, his nature is lovely. I can wait to see how Kitaya develops as well!

    Overall, I loved this story. It would be great if you could continue it, as I think that the world and characters are in a great place to be developed. Definitely keep writing, you are great at it!
    **Winner of Replica writing Comp** In the city of Eto, the life of a noble is worth the live of ten commoners. In order to keep the world balanced, each time a noble comes of age at the age of 16, they...
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