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Equal parts lazy and inspired.

  • Giulia ( Julia)
    I really love some of your ideas and metaphors, especially in The circle of my life, but in terms of constructive criticism, you might want to be careful with how many adjectives you use because a phrase that is too long doesn't flow as well.
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    chloestarjoy*
    3 years ago
    thank you so much(: Yeah. I know... I just need everything I can think of down for some reason... OCD. Can you help me, by pointing out what I should change? You have amazing writing, and I would love mine to grow(:
    Giulia ( Julia)
    3 years ago
    I have a problem doing that too, but sometimes simple is better. Try reading over your work, and judge it, not so much in terms of writing quality, but as if it was a speech instead, and think about weather it feels natural saying it.
    chloestarjoy*
    3 years ago
    thanks, I will try that(:
  • Giulia ( Julia)
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    I am very happy to see that there are still some open-minded people in the world
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    A movellian's guide to sexuality and gender identity. Like a handbook, only cooler.
    Mirlotta
    3 years ago
    me too. :)
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