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That girl you just called fat? She's over dosing on diet pills.
That girl you just called ugly? She spends hours putting on makeup just so people may like her.
That boy you just tripped? He gets abused enough at home.
That girl you told to kill herself? She was found yesterday hanging in a tree.
That boy you told to kill himself? He cut open his wrist, he's now on life support.
Remember the man with the ugly scars? He fought for our country.
Remember that woman with the distorted face? She was in a gas explosion.

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  • Giggles20
    1 years agoReply
    Hey this is really good, if only the chapters were a little longer, bu keep writing lol good job so far
    The Boy Who Murdered Love
    The Boy Who Murder...
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    "Shut the hell up!"He yelled and slammed me against the wall. "Why? Because You can't believe anyone can love you?!?!"I yelled. "No! Nobody could love a monster like me! You Know who i am!". "I know...
  • Giggles20
    1 years agoReply
    i like it!
    INSIDE OF ME
    INSIDE OF ME
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    Ashley don't know how to live after loosing her mom. She has no idea what she should be doing with her life and it doesn't help the fact that she just got out of a toxic relationship... I won't...
  • Giggles20
    2 years agoReply
    Keep writing it's good!
    The Senior // l.h
    The Senior // l.h
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    A Junior can't date a Freshman... Can he?
    Allie Hood
    2 years ago
    Thank you! Sorry I haven't been updating much :/ I'm soooo busy since school has started :) <3
  • Giggles20
    2 years agoReply
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    awe thanx u didnt have to
    My life
    My life
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    This is just a little bit on my life. I have done a diary, but that caused trouble so, I'm trying just a journal on little details. No hate please! Cover Cred goes to Black Dove.
  • Giggles20
    2 years agoReply
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    in chap 8 you could put "but I wish..." at the end of the first paragraph it would make it more like a cliff hangar and draw more people into the rest of the chap.... sorrie if this is being rude constructive critisium?
    Strategy
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    In my world, you have a lot of tests to take. It's hard. But, after you get to the decided age, it gets hostile. You face the test that will start, or destroy your future. What will you choose? Back down,...
    Giggles20
    2 years ago
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    chap 8... second paragraph... take the comma out , put a period and make "found nothing" into "we found nothing, but blood spilled on the ground from the littered about like garbage." might be a little bit more itresting
    Giggles20
    2 years ago
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    chap 8 third paragraph.. "kye ducked, and I dropped to the ground" make it have more detail like " kye ducked and I dropped to the ground in pain instead of instinct, I had a bullet in my calf but I wasn't going to let the pain show, like I say weakness is lothed by all of us and pain is weakness. I was bleeding horribaly when ash dropped to my side, trying to assure me that I was okay and I belived him because it was lodged in my calf... could die from bleeding out or I could have died almost insantly for a clean shot to the heart. so I got up and started to fire " and finish the paragraph as you had it
    Giggles20
    2 years ago
    in the third paragraph you put "the" instead of "then"
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